Wednesday, June 29, 2011

Lyrics help! Can you help me finish my lyrics or critic them?

Im writing a song about time/memories/childhood. This is the
chorus...Im lost on the last line. Can you help or tell me how they
are so far?

Lost in the raptures of time
Stuck in the shadows of memories
Surrounded by sorrow I realize
The warmth of love that shielded me from hate/spite
Has disappeared,

late/slate/wait/weight/debate/await/irate/relate/sedate
(or) fight/might/right/alright/

....has disappeared _ _ _ _ _ _ (i cant think of anything at the
moment, but it should be about 6 syllables rhyming with hate or spite)

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